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How do I...?

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Since you kissed me,
I've been swamped with emotions
of every possible degree and strength,
but only one question...

I had all but given up,
only to have my hopes raised again.
I almost could have died happy,
except that you...

Captured, stolen, possessing.
Or maybe my heart simply
always has been yours,
but if that's true, shouldn't you have...?

Now and even after,
there's no one else but you.
It's enough to make me fear
every word and action because...

You may not love me,
felt the same way,
never said those words...
How do I get you to love me?
Weeeeeee... being at Grandma's always inspires me to write. I wrote a few others, but they're... meh... anyways, this one isn't perfect by a long stretch, but I like the formating.

Read through it all, then take the each sentence of the last stanza, and add it up in reverse order to the end of each stanza and you'll complete the thought.

In case that was confusing... The last sentence of the last stanza matches up with the first stanza, the third sentence of the last stanza matches the second stanza, and so on...

I had hell with that last stanza, trying to make it make sense on it's own and then each one of those sentences be the rest of the thought of another stanza. Then actually be in some type of order... oh, it was hard. But fun. I love this poem for that reason.

I love Glimmer. He inspires me to write poetry.
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Myka-Dee's avatar
this poem reminds me of how i felt a few months back, I really like this one.