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Empty words
are all I hear.
Lies upon lies
are what they are.

Cold words
cut me deeply.
Lasting pain
that never seems to fade.

Accusing words
let guilt destroy me.
Till everything
is my fault.

All these words
do so much damage,
but no one knows...
and no one cares.


I feel so little sympathy,
for the poor cursed strangers I meet.
I care little for the world and it's views,
defying them all for no reason then I can.
I have no passion, I have no drive...
I simply live the life handed to me.
Because I'm cold.

People avoid looking me in the eye,
my frosty gaze unsettles them.
My emotions seem to be non-exsitant,
because they are so numb.
I am so distant from people,
only watching as they die.
Because I'm cold.

There's more to me then that.
A deep longing hidden deep within,
that no one seems to see.
A part of me that screams out,
begging for someone's warm embrace...
someone's love...
because I'm cold.


Take my hand, please?
because I need you so much
that it terrifies me so much.

Hold on tight and don't let go...
so when I trip and fall,
you'll be right there to help me up.

Guide me through this maze,
I don't think I could find my way,
and I'm not brave enough to go on.

And when we reach the end,
I know you'll have to let go,
but please take my hand again...

No one

No one understands,
as I lie about my scars,
covering up the truth
just to protect the one I  love.

No one knows
what I hide underneath my act,
the pain and secrets underneath
because I don't want them to.

No one accepts me,
because I'm a freak.
And even if they don't know it
they sense it...

No one will save me,
because they can't.
I was cursed at  birth
and only I can change my fate.
Just some poems I wrote the other night that I decided to post...
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WhiteoRainoOrchards7 Featured By Owner Edited May 10, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
I like your poems words and please  because  it has a nice meaning the please...reminds me of closeness, and the words reminds of deceitful people. But still the best ones are Leo tolstoy's peoms.
Meg-Ex Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2015
I love these poems. Their from the bottom of your heart,your own feelings.
Nicely done!

jane9899 Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Student General Artist
This is deep😢 I love ur poems they r so good😊😆😄 and entertaining but mostly deep😰😢
Iluminate18 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
cold <3
TrueLove2 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love words at the end I imagined after all they are 'just words' overall I love all of them :3
TrueLove2 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I have to say I love no one the most it relates to me...
Dmeind Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013
Wow amazing
breanna4 Featured By Owner May 28, 2013  Hobbyist
Can I use Cold?? Pwease?
Pocketrocketgem Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013
its a good poem but sad
RannmaruMori Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
these are amazing poems!! I can relate to all four of them!
koroku-ice-princess Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
My favorite is Words :)
Rose770 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i love all of these...especially no one...
Nyx-U-Namikaze Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012
And people wonder I love poems so much. Maybe it's because this is our emotion in small fleeting snippets. Not a story, or a tale- but short and sweet, but forever haunting. I'd say That I love it, but it deserves so much more.
alygatorleigh Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012  Student General Artist
this is so good and sad at the same time i feel sympathetic towards you..............anyway "hugs you and runs off"
AznAngel4ever Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I was wondering if you would let me use your poem "words" in a short story that i am writing?... i will credit you in my short story.
loveamysteriousthing Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011
I can relate to all of these. Love your imagery and just the poems themselves. Great job!
sophialikestoast Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2011
I axn relate to all of them and it feels...............great like someone finally gets it
DFTBAWORLD Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2011
they are awsome![link]
MindFreaked Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2011
Beautiful. I can honestly relate to Noone.
SoundlessWhispers Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Your poems are very....numbing. They seem to mix reality and the mind. Although they themselves are cold and seemingly silent, they are very beautiful. My favorite was "No One".
littleZil Featured By Owner May 31, 2011   Writer

I loved your poem
aaracamila Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2011
like! like! like!
Kitten-Miester Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
My favourite was "cold" :) Thes are really nice, I like em :)
TeQuieroRiss Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2010
Love these. <3
xBlackcatXD Featured By Owner May 18, 2010
I can relate to them!
Your a very good writer! hope to see more of your works!
and btw i'll extend my hand ^ ^
kagura-chan1234 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2009
wow these are good :3 i like Cold the best i think.... but i love them all hehe
Kakashifan-lol Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2009  Student Writer
poets are amazing. I love your work. The emotion is very noticing, I LOVE it. :iconwootplz:
edlivlilkre Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2009
they are good but some arent ryming
NonnashOllidorg Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2010
most poems dont have to ryme becouse ti is about fealing sometimes the best poems dont ryme
edlivlilkre Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2010
=o woopsie friend...I suck....I SOOO SORRY!! *tisk tisk on my head...* D: <3333 :icondaawplz:
swayed Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2009
i luv it !!!
s8tersammers Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow that's deep and I know how you feel
Cookie-Jam Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2009  Student Writer
*reels backwords* Your emotions are strongggg! :)
KatsumiAshia Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2008
wow, i really like this
Onosokie Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2008
Thank you!
revengeofkittie Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow these are really good!
Onosokie Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2008
Thank you!

I love your icon by the way. ^-^
revengeofkittie Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
apple845 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2008
i love ur poems...the one that caught my attention was PLEASE..good job..
Onosokie Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2008
Thank you very much! I always liked that poem as well =)
apple845 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2008
i noticed that...keep updating a good quality poems..
lebeaudessin Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2008   Traditional Artist
AMAZING! I love each poem...I felt the emotion through all of them.
Onosokie Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2008
Thank you for reviewing! I'm delighted you liked them so much.
MissMurder1818 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
I can relate to some of the poems in ways i didn't even reliase. Thank you, there bueatifull.
Onosokie Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2008
That is always my goal, to try and grasp emotions and feelings of people. I happy I managed to achieved that, thank you for reading and reviewing!
MissMurder1818 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
that's ok. Keep up the good work though!
SnowDiamonds Featured By Owner May 5, 2008
I loved your poems! :winner:
Onosokie Featured By Owner May 5, 2008
Thank you for the fav!
wolves78 Featured By Owner May 1, 2008
Chigoya-sensei Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:| How do you get the preview of the poem to do that...scrolly thingy? Does it do that automatically or something? Plz tell meh D: Domo arigatou.
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